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Wrapping up Unit #1 – Moving forward with The Glass Castle

It’s another great week in English IIH.

Monday – More fun with commas.  Look for commas as you read The Glass Castle.  Does Walls follow the rules?  break them?  Can you name them?  Discussion over non fiction stories.  Test on Tuesday. Last polishes to essay.  Esay due Tuesday

Homework for Monday:  Read pages 1-28 of TGC We will annotate together in class; however, be prepared to participate.

Tuesday:  TEST over Unit #1.  Essays Due.  We will annotate together, watch video of Jeanette Walls, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lW0XVno-0gM  and continue with commas.

The rest of the week will be filled with commas and reading and annotating. 

 

 

Week #3 Non-fiction and grammar . . . what could be funner?

Here is our calendar.  Stay focused.  Please print your stories, briefly annotate, and come prepared for class discussion. sept2011

Welcome to Week #2

Wow!  What fabulous writing with your two sentence assignment!  Well done! Bravo!  Check out the student writing and let me know which ones you think deserve praise and recognition on the wall of writing!

This week:  We will be discussing  The Help and the Color of Water in small groups.  Document1 is due on Wednesday.  Presentations due on Thursday.  Objective test on Friday. We will soon be writing our first essay – Essay of Definition.

We have quite a few stories both fiction and nonfiction to read within unit #1.  However, our first memoir will be The Glass Castle. I strongly urge you to start shopping and have the novel in class by Wednesday, September 14th.

 

English IIH sentences are due on Sunday.

Please post your sentences here.  You do not have to create a blog. Simply post under ‘reply’ The blogs that are on the right side of the site under ‘blog roll’ we will leave alone for now.  If you have questions, let me know.  Post away.

Welcome to English IIH

We look forward to meeting you and sharing our love of literature and writing and words with you!  This site contains our 10 units for the year.  Each unit is designed thematically and includes a novel (or extensive excerpt of a novel) that presents our theme. As we struggle togetheter to answer each unit’s essential questions, we will read a variety of carefully chosen reading that will build on this theme.  Units will include both non-fiction, fiction, and poetry to help enhance themes, draw comparisons, and allow students to make connections and gain understanding of the text, the world, themselves. With many of the units,  students will write in a variety of modes. Students will follow a specific writing process and show revisions and peer editing work.  We believe that the process is essential to achieving a polished final product. Our grammar units have been carefully crafted to incorporate the rules within student writing.  Students will master the grammar rules and apply rules to their writing. In addition, grammar tests have been designed in ACT format to help with test practice.  Speaking and presentation skills will be a  part of many units, and students will rehearse and present polished speeches.

“Flowers have an expression of countenance as much as men and animals. Some seem to smile; some have a sad expression; some are pensive and diffident; others again are plain, honest and upright, like the broad-faced sunflower and the hollyhock.”Image


Our First Assignment:  One way to become a better writer is to model or copy the style of another.  Now, there is always room to add your own style and flare to your writing, but following patterns is a great way to practice.  So, we will start by looking at the quote below.  Read it.

What are your initial thoughts?  What is the writer saying? Do you agree with what he/she says?  Have you given much thought to the face of a flower?

Write two sentences following the pattern: Simple sentence. Simple sentence; simple sentence; simple sentence; simple sentence, appositive, appositiv

You may use some of the same words.  Note the word ‘some’ is repeated to add emphasis. Choose your own word that will repeat in the second sentence.

So, now consider what you’d like to write about. . . it can be broad and abstract or narrowed and concrete.  (i.e. clouds, layer cake, dogs, cars, shoes) If you want to look at Mrs. Will’s example, click here.  Mrs. Meyer’s example, hugs

Post your two sentences with a picture (thumnail size) and do not include your name.  We will choose top 20 for the wall of fame.  All will then be graded.

Rubric:

1. Student writes two sentences and carefully follows pattern 1-5

2. Student creates a good comparison that is thought provoking 1-5

3. Student uses vocabulary and imagery that enhances idea 1-5

4. Student adds a picture and posts here on this site without a name. 1-5

“Flowers have an expression of countenance as much as men and animals. Some seem to smile; some have a sad expression; some are pensive and diffident; others again are plain, honest and upright, like the broad-faced sunflower and the hollyhock.”Image