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Welcome to English IIH

We look forward to meeting you and sharing our love of literature and writing and words with you!  This site contains our 10 units for the year.  Each unit is designed thematically and includes a novel (or extensive excerpt of a novel) that presents our theme. As we struggle togetheter to answer each unit’s essential questions, we will read a variety of carefully chosen reading that will build on this theme.  Units will include both non-fiction, fiction, and poetry to help enhance themes, draw comparisons, and allow students to make connections and gain understanding of the text, the world, themselves. With many of the units,  students will write in a variety of modes. Students will follow a specific writing process and show revisions and peer editing work.  We believe that the process is essential to achieving a polished final product. Our grammar units have been carefully crafted to incorporate the rules within student writing.  Students will master the grammar rules and apply rules to their writing. In addition, grammar tests have been designed in ACT format to help with test practice.  Speaking and presentation skills will be a  part of many units, and students will rehearse and present polished speeches.

“Flowers have an expression of countenance as much as men and animals. Some seem to smile; some have a sad expression; some are pensive and diffident; others again are plain, honest and upright, like the broad-faced sunflower and the hollyhock.”Image


Our First Assignment:  One way to become a better writer is to model or copy the style of another.  Now, there is always room to add your own style and flare to your writing, but following patterns is a great way to practice.  So, we will start by looking at the quote below.  Read it.

What are your initial thoughts?  What is the writer saying? Do you agree with what he/she says?  Have you given much thought to the face of a flower?

Write two sentences following the pattern: Simple sentence. Simple sentence; simple sentence; simple sentence; simple sentence, appositive, appositiv

You may use some of the same words.  Note the word ‘some’ is repeated to add emphasis. Choose your own word that will repeat in the second sentence.

So, now consider what you’d like to write about. . . it can be broad and abstract or narrowed and concrete.  (i.e. clouds, layer cake, dogs, cars, shoes) If you want to look at Mrs. Will’s example, click here.  Mrs. Meyer’s example, hugs

Post your two sentences with a picture (thumnail size) and do not include your name.  We will choose top 20 for the wall of fame.  All will then be graded.

Rubric:

1. Student writes two sentences and carefully follows pattern 1-5

2. Student creates a good comparison that is thought provoking 1-5

3. Student uses vocabulary and imagery that enhances idea 1-5

4. Student adds a picture and posts here on this site without a name. 1-5

“Flowers have an expression of countenance as much as men and animals. Some seem to smile; some have a sad expression; some are pensive and diffident; others again are plain, honest and upright, like the broad-faced sunflower and the hollyhock.”Image


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  2. I’m not sure how to post a picture. Can someone tell me how or should i just post a hyperlink? Also, is this where I post my response?

  3. Hi Mrs. Meyer. So I did the assignment and posted on the blog that I created, but I’m confused on how you are going to be able to see it. I also sent you an email please reply because I want to make sure you get it. Thanks.

    -Jessica, 3rd Hour

  4. “Clouds express the feelings of the great sky’s daily personality. Some clouds have a bright expression; some seem gloomy and melancholy; some are laid back and feathery; others however are enlarged and strong, puffy and powerful, as if they mimic the wistful wind in a storm blowing across our Earth.”

  5. The months of the year have personalities as unique and different as you and I. Some are cold and calloused; the opposite are welcoming and have a limitless energy about them; few do not know where they stand between the two; fewer are happy to be who they are, untethered and independent, like the life-bearing April and the ambrosial October.

  6. Hockey players have an expression of toughness as much as football players or wrestlers. Some have broken noses; some have missing teeth; some have bruises and cuts; others just look tough, rugged and fearless, like the captain or the defensemen.

  7. Cars have an expression of countenance as much as men and animals. Some seem sympathetic; others seem fierce and read; others seem to appear majestic and noble, and yet, some seem blase and weary, like the 57′ Bel-Air and the classic ThunderBird.

    For those who dont know about cars, here are some that show these expressions:
    (Blase) 1957 Chevy Bel-air – http://www.remarkablecars.com/main/chevrolet/chevrolet-00206-1.jpg
    (Weary) Classic ThunderBird – http://www.leftcoastclassics.com/1957-ford-thunderbird-/1957-t-bird-001.jpg
    (Majestic and Noble) Bentley S1 – http://www.flickr.com/photos/imagetaker1/2826317366/
    (Fierce) Pagani Zonda Cinque – http://www.carsbase.com/photo/Pagani-Zonda_Cinque_mp151_pic_65578.jpg
    (Sympathetic) 1968 Volkswagen Beetle – http://www.seriouswheels.com/pics-1960-1969/1968-Volkswagen-Beetle-Roadrunner-Front-PO.jpg

  8. White roses represent purity and light, likewise is the maiden a representation of all that is pure and good in the world. They smile for the sun’s warmth; some have thorns to keep the hatred and primordial essence of the world at bay; all have the desire to find their true love, no matter their outward appearance.

    Photo: media.photobucket.com/image/bloody%20rose/sakurasetsuka/Dark-Other-28246-567553.jpg?o=2

  9. Musical intruments have individual dispositions much like those of human beings. Some are brave; few are airy and carefree; others seem noble and majestic; still others are full of warmth or anger, like the powerful piano or clashing drums.

  10. The letters of the alphabet have as much character as a man or woman. Many are selfish and rude; some seem to softly weep; some are indifferent and lethargic; others are compassionate, affectionate, and charming, like the letters D and M.

  11. Cars can show the way that people feel inside. The placement of a car’s headlights and body kit may show expressions; some show smiles and joy; few show anxiety or depression; lots show of quirkiness, individuality and style, like racing stripes on an Excalibur.

  12. Couches have an expression of countenace as much as desks and chairs. Some seem outdated; some seem awkward and uncomfortable; some seem rough and itchy, while still, others are luxurious and inviting, like velvet or leather.

  13. Clouds have an expression of personality as much as people and animals. Some seem open and friendly; some give comfort; some are just plain and boring, others are soft, warm and inviting, like the family member that is loved by you.

  14. Toddlers have an expression of carelessness as much as a puppy or a new born baby. Many have no worries and play all day; many do not think twice about a decision; many explore everything new, many fall but get right back up; many are so small, but yet they are inspirations, they show us how to live every moment to its fullest.

  15. Clouds have an expression of happiness and beauty as much as you or I. Some are big and loud; others show a look of sadness and defeat, while some just seem playful and imanginative, like our young minds today. http://free-extras.com/images/cloud-1252.htm

  16. Hair and their styles have as much individuality like a person’s life where you get frustrated of it at one point or another. Some are unkempt and not care for; some long or short; some go through alterations; others simple and some not so much, but each one unique and extraordinary in it’s own way.

  17. Have you ever looked down at the path you are walking, and noticed the incomparable character in each? Some seem to be hiding from the world; others seem to be beckoning for new travelers; some are welcoming and furnished with light; others again are inhospitable, with a morbid air about them and unknown to all, like the path people immediately divert from-even though no one has actually been able to tell where the path leads.

    the image is on this site:

  18. Food has a way of dressing itself to make itself something more than it is like facial expressions. Chocolate frosting makes grins grin to the moon and back; icky slime makes a tongue stick out in disgust; something brown and green makes heads turn in rejection; lollipops create smiles happiness and peas create cries of agony in children.

  19. Guns have a personality and appearance much like people. Some were “born in the U.S.A.” and seem plain; others are foreign and exotic; there are some whose bodies are a blank canvas, prepared to collect scars, stories and age: while some, like supermodels and modern rifles, are sleek and sexy, free of blemishes, but made partially from plastic and devoid of personality.

    http://www.remington.com/products/firearms/centerfire/model-700/model-700-alaskan-ti.aspx

  20. Nails have an expression of personality as much as flowers and weeds. Few are attractive, few are dull; few are filthy and sickening, while others are beautiful, neat, and clean. Like a french manicure or cracked nails.

  21. Hair and their styles have as much individuality like a person’s life where you get frustrated of it at one point or another. Some are unkempt and not care for; some can be long or short; some have been through alterations; others just simple and some not so much, but each one is unique and extraordinary in it’s own way.

  22. Hospitals have an expression of life as much as an expectant mother and a funeral procession. Some seem to weep: some have an uplifting expression; some are abstruse and ominous; others are miraculous, hopeful and life changing, like the first breath or the last sigh.

  23. Books illustrate individuality just as people do. Some are thick skinned; some are aged; some are dull and tedious; others are exciting, stimulating and stirring like classic The Hound of Baskervilles or distinctive For Whom the Bell Tolls

    “Why, you crazy — the fall’ll probably kill ya!”

  24. Music has an expression of happiness as much as your inner self. Some seem to soothe your soul; while others have intensity and passion; others seem to give reason or moral, and yet, some give you strength and inspiration, like jazz and rhythm

  25. Pets have an importance to a person like a family member or a friend. Some are always there for you; some are there to listen when you’re melancholy; some are rambunctious; some disobey you no matter what you say; being someone’s first responsibility like a goldfish or a man’s best friend like a dog.

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